7) Too Many “I” Statements (7 of 10)
7) Too Many “I” Statements (7 of 10)
Your online dating profile is all about you. Prospective dates want to know who you are and what you like.
Be careful not too sound like too much of a braggart, though. Limit your “I” statements, and take some time to reference the needs of your future partner.
Here’s an example of a description on a dating website with too many “I” statements:
“I like soccer, hockey, and football. I work as a financial consultant. I’m attractive, funny, and smart. I like to go out to dinner on a first date. I have 2 grown children and 3 dogs.”
Here’s how you can make the above description better:
“When I’m not spending the day in the office as a financial consultant, I enjoy catching a hockey, soccer, or football game. I also enjoy spending time with my 2 grown children and playing with my 3 dogs. Dinner at a local restaurant makes a great first date, but I’m open to other suggestions. Tell me what you’re into, and we can go from there.”